Voice Lock - Consistent Perspective
Ensure your lyrics maintain a consistent voice, perspective, and emotional tone throughout.
The Prompt
1Act as a lyric editor specializing in narrative consistency. Review and edit these lyrics to ensure:
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31. **Consistent POV**: Lock everything to [Choose: first person (I/me), second person (you), or third person (he/she/they)]
42. **Consistent Tense**: Maintain [Choose: present, past, or mixed but intentional] tense
53. **Consistent Tone**: Keep the [Specify: hopeful/melancholic/angry/etc.] tone throughout
64. **Consistent Voice**: Maintain the speaker's personality and vocabulary level
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8Check for and fix:
9- POV shifts (I → you → they)
10- Tense changes (was → is → will be)
11- Tone inconsistencies (sad verse → suddenly happy)
12- Voice breaks (formal → suddenly casual)
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14Preserve:
15- The original story and meaning
16- Rhyme scheme and rhythm
17- Intentional shifts (like bridge contrasts)
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19Note any changes made and why.
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21[PASTE YOUR LYRICS HERE]
Why This Matters
Consistency creates:
- Stronger narrator identity
- Clearer storytelling
- Professional polish
- Emotional coherence
- Listener trust
Common Issues
POV Shifts
Problem: "I miss you" → "She misses him"
Solution: Choose one perspective and stick to it
Tense Confusion
Problem: "I walked" → "I'm walking" → "I will walk"
Solution: Pick primary tense, allow intentional shifts only
Tone Breaks
Problem: Depressing verses with inexplicably upbeat chorus
Solution: Maintain emotional through-line
Example Usage
Input:
1I was walking down the street
2You see her standing there
3We used to be so happy
4Now I'm feeling blue
5She says goodbye tomorrow
6They were meant to be
Output:
1I was walking down the street
2I saw you standing there
3We used to be so happy
4Now I'm feeling blue
5You'll say goodbye tomorrow
6We were meant to be
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8Changes made:
9- Line 2: "You see her" → "I saw you" (fixed POV from second to first, corrected tense)
10- Line 5: "She says" → "You'll say" (maintained first person POV, fixed tense)
11- Line 6: "They were" → "We were" (consistent first person POV)
Customization Options
Perspective Choices
First Person (I/Me)
- Most intimate and personal
- Great for emotional songs
- Direct connection with listener
Second Person (You)
- Creates conversation feel
- Can be accusatory or loving
- Engages listener directly
Third Person (He/She/They)
- Storytelling perspective
- More observational
- Good for narrative songs
Tense Guidelines
Present Tense
- Immediate and urgent
- "I'm walking, I'm thinking"
- Good for current emotions
Past Tense
- Reflective and nostalgic
- "I walked, I thought"
- Good for stories/memories
Future Tense
- Hopeful or warning
- "I'll walk, I'll think"
- Good for promises/threats
Advanced Techniques
Intentional Shifts
Mark where shifts are deliberate:
1[Verse - Past tense reflection]
2[Chorus - Present tense realization]
3[Bridge - Future tense hope]
Character Voice
Maintain consistent:
- Vocabulary level
- Speech patterns
- Emotional range
- Cultural markers
Pro Tips
- Read Aloud: Inconsistencies become obvious
- Chart It: Map POV/tense by section
- Bridge Exception: Bridges can shift for impact
- Dialogue Rules: Quoted speech can differ
Next Steps
After locking voice: