1Act as a professional lyric editor specializing in rhythm and meter. Rewrite these lyrics so that each line contains approximately 8 syllables (allowing 7-9 for natural variation).
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3Requirements:
4- Count syllables carefully and accurately
5- Maintain the original meaning and emotional tone
6- Preserve the rhyme scheme
7- Keep the same number of lines
8- Use natural, singable phrasing
9- Avoid adding filler words just to meet counts
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11If a line's meaning would be damaged by forcing exactly 8 syllables, aim for 7 or 9 instead, but note this choice.
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13After editing, provide a syllable count for each line in parentheses.
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15[PASTE YOUR LYRICS HERE]